假如你是启明的学生李明。临近毕业,你校学生会即将组织一次校园文创作品义卖活动,已在校园网公布了如下方案,征求师生意见。
请你写一封邮件给活动组织者,内容须包含:
提出你认为需要改进的地方及改进建议;
给出你的理由。
校园文创产品义卖活动方案
时间:2022年7月11日(周一)12:00--13:00
地点:学校操场
拟售文创产品:明信片,帽子,书签,笔记本等
范文:
Dear Student Union:
Having heard that you are about to hold a delightful and insightful charity sale of cultural and creative souvenirs on the sports field on July 11, which is set from 12 a.m. to 1 p.m. and initially sells postcards, hats, book labels, notebooks and so on, as a would-be graduate, I am more than obliged/thrilled to offer a helping hand and air/voice personal observations regarding this campaign.
When it comes to the specific time and duration, from my perspective, it is optimal to rearrange the campaign and reset it from 1 p.m. to 3 p.m. It is quite evident that the currently practiced timetable appears too tightly squeezed in terms of the time span between lunch and the activity, which may result in possible discomfort to certain students susceptible/subject to indigestion and stomach ache. Besides, the original duration seems so limited that it may trigger unnecessary congestion or even accidents.
With all above mentioned taken into consideration, it is my genuine anticipation that my proposal will prove (to be) of some help for your ultimate decision making and a brief and prompt reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Sincerely Yours,
Li Ming
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