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读后续写：
这篇读后续写关于家庭与爱的主旨，讲述了没有理解爱的真谛，误解当前父母的相处模式的作者曾向母亲询问。随后在见证了父亲生病后，理解母亲的话：针线之于棉被，藏于其里，好似从未显现，却能将生活更坚韧温暖。
第一段的要点应该是：
1. 母亲照顾父亲
2. 父母亲的神态，展示恩爱的细节（可与文中作者对父亲的老印象进行对比）
第二段的要点应该是：
1. 一种可能的发展是：父亲康复，夫妻间更加恩爱（添加动作、环境细节）
2. 另一种可能发展就比较精巧：父亲没康复，虽然是装的，偷偷告诉作者是因为享受与母亲的陪伴
3. 主旨应与前面的“针线与棉被之间的关系”类比，呼应。点出：真正的爱不是电视剧中所谓的浪漫，而是像针线般藏在里面，不显露，却坚韧不摧，温暖人心。
I listened carefully but I couldn't understand her until the next spring when my father suddenly got sick seriously. It was the first time that I had seen anxiety engulfing mom's heart. Every time father was being treated in the ward, mom would pace back and forth with worry in every line of her face. Every time his health improved, mom would wear a bright smile. My father had never been so gentle, it seemed they were the most harmonious couple.
The doctor had said my father would recover in two months. After two months' tender care, dad had fully recovered. With the day of hospital discharge arriving, the couple helped each other walk to the nearby park, smelling the fragrant flowers in spring and bathed in the charming sunshine. After the day, they seemed to return to normal: busy for money, no flower, no kisses. However, every time the setting sun cast its golden glow on their faces, it reminded me what mom said: the most luxurious love is neither flower nor kisses, but a thread in the quilt of our life: inside, but can make our life strong and warm.
范文：
I listened carefully but I couldn't understand her until the next spring when my father suddenly got sick seriously. My mother had to stay with him in the hospital for a month. When they returned, they both looked very pale. Every day in the morning and dusk, my mother helped my father walk slowly on the country road. My father had never been so gentle. It seemed they were the most harmonious couple. The sun gently glistened through the leaves, which made up the most beautiful picture in the world.
The doctor had said my father would recover in two months. But after two months he still couldn't walk alone. All of us were worried about him. One day, he told me gently: “Susan, to be honest I just like walking with your mom." Reading his eyes, I know he loves mom deeply. Once I thought love meant flowers, gifts and sweet kisses. But now I understand love is just a thread in the quilt of our life. Love is inside, making life cozy and warm.
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