假定你是李华,曾在你校工作的外教 Peter 得知你们最近搬迁到新校区学习,来信询问新校区的情况,请你给他回封邮件,内容包括:
1. 介绍新校区(地理位置,建筑布局,设施设备等);
2. 邀请他闲时来访。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
命题分析
与全国卷I书面表达特点比较:
1. 真实情景,都与外国友人或事件有关, 与学生的生活相关。
2. 体裁都是应用文,采用书信形式。学生需要了解书信的格式。
3. 都是半开放式作文,给出要点,但仍然给学生留有一定的自由发挥的空间,有利于学生充分展示自己的写作能力。学生要学会补充信息,充实文章内容。
官方范文
Dear Peter,
I am really glad to hear from you. Things have changed quite a lot since you were last at our school. The biggest change is probably our new campus which you might be interested to know more about. (写信背景、写信目的)
The new campus is more conveniently situated, within walking distance of the city center. As a result, now we have easier access to public facilities than before.(要点1.地理位置:主题句+拓展句) On campus, areas of different functions are scientifically laid out, with the modern teaching block standing in the middle, surrounded by other functional areas like the library, the gym and the stadium, etc. In all four corners of the campus lie beautiful gardens of different themes. Above all, equipped with a computer and a smart screen, the spacious classrooms help create an ideal atmosphere for our daily study.(要点2、3:建筑布局、设施设备)
Do remember to drop by when you have time! Our new campus is well worth a visit.(要点4:邀请闲时来访)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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