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现在上海高考采用的是三加三模式（语数外+理化生政史地任选三门），以往采用的是三加一模式（语数外+理化生政史地任选一门），针对这两种高考模式谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括：
1、比较两种模式的异同
2、你更喜欢哪种模式并陈述理由.
文章开头我们需要两者对比，既然我们已经有了明确的主题，那么在对比的时候就可以有所侧重，将三加三的优势与三加一相应的弱势作为对比点：
When it comes to the difference between two policies, the most obvious one is that the former one put much emphasis on a certain optional course so that it was more demanding for us students while the new one divides the pressure into three categories and we have more freedom to choose our keen subjects for our exams.
这样的文字经过整理作为开头——
As college entrance examination policy changes, there is a debate on whether the revolution is necessary or not. When it comes to the difference between the two, the most obvious one is that the former one put much emphasis on a certain optional course. Even though it might partly improve our understanding in one field, it was much more demanding for us students. For the new one, it divides the pressure into three categories and we apparently have more freedom to choose our keen subjects for our exams.(88)
文章开头算是结束了，接下来到我们的立论段。
首先讲明观点——更加支持三加三新政——from my point of view, the old policy actually pales into insignificance in terms of feasibility and future prospect.
Supporting idea1: we have more chances for the exams so that our risk of performing worse in one exam can be decreased a lot
Supporting idea2:expand our horizons and help cultivate our interests in different field which certainly benefit us in major choosing and job searching in the future.
两个part相结合就可以作为我们的立论段来进行写作：
From my perspective, the old policy pales into insignificance in terms of feasibility and future prospect.
Few people would deny that in the past, chances are that if we fail to perform excellently in the final exam, we may lose the opportunity to be admitted into our ideal university. But today, we have less risk since we can have three separate tests in two years and they add up to our total scores.
What——s more, choosing three subjects as our testing items can largely expand our horizons and help cultivate our interests in different field which certainly benefit us a lot in major choosing and job searching in the future.(110)
到这里为止，根据字数统计来看我们的字数已经完全足够，已经可以结尾完成一篇完整的文章了，但老胡还是想给大家展示一下反驳段的写法，仅供参考，需要自取。
However, some may argue that the concentration on one specific subject is of great importance, but I can——t accept their concept since we can never know what we are interested in with only one course to finish. So the concentration on only one lesson might just be a waste of time.
反驳段的精髓就在于——选择对方观点中比较弱势的观点，指出对方观点的不足从而使自己的观点更加鲜明。
最后我们的结尾部分：
From what has been discussed above, I hold the opinion that the new college entrance examination is better and more suitable for us senior high school students.
至此，这篇文章基本算是完成。
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