保护野生动物海报设计大赛英语作文 关于保护野生动物海报设计大赛的英语作文

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 David 准备参加以 "保护野生动物"为主题的海报设计大赛,现就参赛作品初稿征求你的意见.请回复邮件,内容包括:1.提出存在的问题;2.提出修改建议。aTg答案圈

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Dear David,aTg答案圈

Having reviewed your initial draft for the poster design competition on "Protecting Wildlife", I’m writing to offer some suggestions for improvement.aTg答案圈

Your design seems to lack a message that can motivate people to take action.aTg答案圈

Additionally, the quality of the images and the cluttered layout need to be improved.aTg答案圈

Therefore, I suggest you use a concise and convincing message and high-quality images relevant to the theme. Meanwhile, you’d better simplify the layout by removing some unnecessary elements that distract attention from the message.aTg答案圈

I hope my feedback is helpful. Best of luck with your design.aTg答案圈

Yours,aTg答案圈

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