某机器人制造公司正在研发一款辅助师生教与学的机器人。该公司征集客户需求与设计创意,先通过互联网开展题为“Classroom Robot”的英语征文活动。请按照以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
要点:
1)Classroom Robot将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化;
2)你期待Classroom Robot能够做些什么;
3)你对Classroom Robot期待的心情。

范文:
Classroom Robot
Classroom robots will come to our classroom. What good news! It will influence our teaching and learning greatly.
In my opinion, I hope the classroom robots can help us in these ways. First, I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed. Second, the classroom robots are also expected to collect our problems for our teachers, because not every student is brave enough to communicate with teachers often. What's more, I hope classroom robots can play with us between classes.
How I hope classroom robots can come to my classroom as soon as possible. I'm looking forward to that day.
解析:
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时和一般将来时;
③ 提示:根据提示信息介绍Classroom Robot,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,介绍Classroom Robot将对我们的教与学带来巨大的变化;第二步,你期待Classroom Robot能够做些什么;
第三步,你对Classroom Robot期待的心情。
[亮点词汇]
① in my opinion 依我看来
② communicate with 和某人交流
③ as soon as 一……就
[高分句型]
① What good news!(感叹句)
② I hope the classroom robots can mark our homework and collect our mistakes quickly so that our teachers can be more relaxed.(省略that的宾语从句以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
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