写作解析:
本文是要感谢自己的一位老师,用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作,时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,写作内容必须包含对老师的印象(可以描述外貌,也可以描述性格)、感谢老师的原因(可以分类列出原因,也可以直接用一个事例。如果是描述具体事例,要注意用一般过去时。)以及对老师的祝福。这三个要点缺一不可。结构上,可用本文给出的开头直接引出写作对象——自己想感谢的老师,然后简单介绍这位老师,如年龄、外貌、性格等。接着通过记叙一个典型的事例来表达对该老师的感激之情。最后,与开头相呼应,再次表达感激之情并给出对老师的祝福。
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It's time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I'm here to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Tan. She is one of the best teachers that I have met.
Miss Tan is a pretty young lady. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. She is very kind and friendly to us, but she is very strict with us in our studies.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me not to give up and promised to help me. Meanwhile, she helped me understand every single question patiently. Thanks to her, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made great progress in English.
I really want to say thanks to Miss Tan. The love and support from her will be with me forever. I hope she will be happier and healthier in the future. Best wishes for her.
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